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Alobar
Lv 5
Alobar asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 1 decade ago

Anyone up for surfing?

In Silence

You know how to surf echoes,

the more musical the better, you say

I admire that,

but can’t wait for the day

you tell me

you have surfed the vibrations of night

and the hum of the stars

Then you will be ready;

Then we will go together

and learn

to surf silence

and understand love.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    Shooting the curl as the crest of the vibration peaks and towers high above and comes crashing down around me as I race through the tube for the light at the end. I like this one.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    My doctors says I'm to stay away from any water related sports... yes I have a note... I just left it at home somewhere.

    Yes, but sometimes silence causes the biggest noise of all. I'll stick with musical echoes for now.

    Nice concept, Alobar.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Someone needs to feel darkness before they can understand true happiness?

    I feel off today. I hope I'm getting these poems right today.

    And there seems to be a theme running through this section this morning (almost afternoon).

  • 1 decade ago

    I have surfed the silence but I'll never understand love.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Words unspoken

    heard in hearts open

    sitting in the silence

    sweet is the sound I hear

    scream to me

  • 1 decade ago

    Distractions hinder, silence intensifies. I can't wait until you 'ski' silence! lol Good pen.

  • ?
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Surf silence...lovely poetic phrasing...original...nice write!

  • Alluding to "silence is golden".

    This is a love poem.

  • -
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    WOW...Kilroy's Sister gave this write a whole new meaning to me!

    Well done, to you both!

    ma

  • 1 decade ago

    This is a wonderful metaphor!

    I stand in awe.

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