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the mexican L
Lv 5
the mexican L asked in Arts & HumanitiesBooks & Authors · 1 year ago

WRITERS NEED HELP?

I had a good sentence in my head but forgot a couple of important words. I could only write this inferior version, I'd like some input on how to improve this sentence better.

"Her clothes were glued to her skin revealing her curves"

 or

"Her white robe revealed her curves"

I cannot remember the correct words I wanted to say, how frustrating.

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  • m
    1 year ago

    The folds of her white robes stuck to her skin, revealing the beautiful curves beneath.

  • sam
    Lv 5
    1 year ago

    Her white robe was untied and draped open, to reveal her tight fitting clothes beneath...and her curves.

    Although i haven’t met many people who  wear a robe over tight clothes. Most people would wear a robe with casual attire.

  • ?
    1 year ago

    Slinky clothes and suttle curves or aluring clothes and well praportined curves or laid back clothes and apeling curves or get in the way clothes and finger lickin curves lol

    Source(s): 5 children
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