Does this poem provoke any feelings or thoughts in you?

It makes me feel lonely ... and it makes me expect something.

Why is there no blood - intriguing question.

If a wound is small - it will not bleed. However - a fast, quick slice - can produce a very deep cut - that will not immediately bleed. Kind of like - the flesh is in shock. The scythe-like blade of the moon - could deliver such a cut ♥

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it made me feel quiet

i feel like im on a beach

the moon is very clear in my mind

the poem makes me think

of all the people who feel kinda numb

and the title makes me think of lonely ppl

who just need a helping hand

i think, there's no bleeding because ppl who are subjected to emotional pain, at one point, become almost immune to it, so that, things that would hurt a 'normal' person would be simply shrugged off because of the wall that they build i guess

for me, the tone of this poem was very somber

cool work alobar :)

you have a great number of solid cloth right here. i might, regardless of if, group the suitable products into separate poems or a minimum of into separated words. working example, your tittle is "10 mg Romance" so how approximately organizing into 10 paragraphs or words for that tittle that are useful statements. The detrimental ideas you're having may be a separate poem.

Oh, you are wrong. That sliver of a moon and all other moons have bled poets for eternity. Bleeding their words out for the loves of their lives...

Nicely written. Few words, grand statement!

it evokes nice imagery but i certainly don't wonder why the sky doesn't bleed. perhaps an extra stanza would give this poem more of a point? it feels like it is supposed to be symbolic of something but whatever it is it isn't coming through.

It makes me think of people who cut themselves

because there is so much pain inside

they need to see it expressed outwardly as blood

to validate their pain.

The speaker in this pen is in pain, and doesn't understand why there is no outward manifestation of it....I understand and this is beautifully expressed. Well done.

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Ooh, I like this very much. It was quiet and peaceful to me for some reason.

i like it but i'm in no mood today to be very intellectual so i can't really speculate as to what it means but it has a good feel to it. i really like it. is it original?

Like I wish it would rain

(dos that make sense?

anyway I like it.