smallsara1994

Okay my ex and i are completly over and its all getting so annoying first of all why we broke up, well basicly he was immature and smoke weed to much, that didnt bug me till he promised to quite and than did it any way, and i finally it got to the point were we were going to hang out and he ditched me to go smoke and i called him and asked were he was and he goes with friends and i said are you smoking an he said not yet i got so pissed i handed the phone to my friend and was like **** him i dont care tell him he smokes than we are done... and of course he did, the next day at school my friend was like just hear him out, i was angry enough and he was like my mom was being gay, bla bla bull **** and i looked at him and said i dont belive your bullshit excuess im smarter than that, and he walked off we havnt talked except him trying to piss me off and it works, he gets people to come up to me and be like he is smoking this weekend and he tells me it too and we fight every time we see each other, and well now this is what i need a come back too... okay so he has pictuers of his bong up on myspace and he tried telling me that he has enough of a life were weed doesnt control him so i commeneted it saying oh wow you have a live and he put as the caption yes i have a life sara and a nice bong... so my qustion to you is what should i say to really piss him off like a good comeback i need one cause i look stupid and im done taking the high rode please help :]]

Okay well im wroking on a book and i watned to know a few things about getting stuff published!

well one is were can i get it edited and cheacked for errors and such

also were would be a good place to send in my work

and last but not least how do i know if i have a chance of sending in a book

look this is the way i see it, me and my mother were having a discussion about the topic of evolution and both my parents have taught me to believe that god created evolution to me this theory sounds completely sensible, and Christians who say that Evolution is wrong take this into consideration....

In the bible it says god mad the heavens and the earth, what is the heavens possibly i don't know the universe maybe not heaven it self but actually the stars all that mess

The earth hm , the planet we are on right okay sounds good so far okay, next her made the ocean and the sky's right? okay evolution if I'm correct states that the earth was at first one giant ocean, weird those match up also!

than fish, maybe not fish as you think of it like little things swimming around, also remember god himself didn't wright the bible he sent it to man to wright it, maybe people who didn't understand as well took it that way as just fishy.

Than birds, well in Evolution came.... drum roll please bugs, big big bugs! maybe if you saw a big bird in your dreams you would think hey a bird not damn that's a big bird than land animals than man

Also my parents have always taught me that, just cause they are adam and eve doesn't mean they were human as we look today, that wouldn't fit they would be different looking they lived in a rugged time make sense right?

Last but not least the earth being 6000 years old, ever thought maybe 6000 years old of the world that we think of now, like human civilization it also mentions the end not as the world ending the world as we know it.... make sense when you think of it that way also the world was not created in 7 days in human years cause the bible says..... that a year to god is a thousand, so there is my point i think it makes Perfect sense and personally people take the bible to seriously if you look at it in a diff rent light in a more hypothetical way and less serious way it would make better sense think out side of the box people god was smart enough to make it a challenge to understand and i think his Technic works perfectly causing so much controversy makes more people read the word of the god so there think of all this and tell me what you think

okay I'm currently writing a love novel about a girl and a boy who pretty much share minds, its a story from both the boys view and the girls and it starts with the girl always having the same dream, her seeing her with some random boy but he leaves her and he says he will be back but she knows he wont my problem is that i don't know were he is leaving to, like he leaves her, i was thinking of things and i want him to have a chance of dying, thats how its going to end is her reliving the dream and he leaves, not knowing if he will ever keeps his promise, but i don't know were he is going to what is the dilemma nothing i just have the small details so if you have anything i would love to know ten points to the best answer please please please help!

what do you think? okay i know its just a rough draft i would love your imput its long i know

Have you ever had that feeling? You Know the one, when your stomach hurts, and you feel heavy. Like someone is pushing down on you with such might, that you feel like your going to shatter? When you can feel your legs tremble, and you just shake; telling yourself over and over again that you just wont cry. You take a deep breath, and when you let all the air out, you begin to think your fine. Just when you start to feel good, that brief moment is when you think of why you want to cry, and you feel all the tears just fall like rain. You hurt all over and you're choking between gasping, and the painful sobs, but thats not what hurts the most. The pain of knowing you're too weak to even hold back from crying. Knowing you're messed up, and knowing that the cause of these tears were your own stupidity. Confusing right? Yeah i get that a lot, but i think emotions are confusing. We feel this way and don't know why, we only know what triggered them, so what triggered this? More than you can imagine.

I woke up again looked towards my night stand with a glowing green light reading "Three Thirty Four," great another restless night, I thought to my self. I tried to wonder back to my dreams but it was a helpless attempt. I threw the covers off of me facing the cold air that i was protected from when surrounded by the comforting shell of blankets. I was sick of the same routine, falling asleep around twelve and waking up around three to face nothing more but the dark empty room i called home. I swung my legs over the bed stretched my arms and let out a yawn, for a brief second i forgot all worries, soon to be reminded by the terrible truth...i was alone. I slide down slowly off my bed and sat on the floor. I curled my legs in front of me and breathed deeply in to let all the dark, quietness of my empty room sink in. It was dead silent and it nearly killed me, i felt the walls sitting there taunting me, laughing at my pitiful life. i knew why i couldn't sleep but i didn't want to face the reality, but i was forced to. The truth was that i was crazy, absoulutely, completely, and positively crazy.

Every night i dreaded closing my eyes, in fear of seeing the same scene played over and over again in the mega-big screen of my brain. Not cause it was scary, trust me it wasn't scary, but it was a nightmare. No, not the ones were you woke up in a cold sweat, screaming at the top of your lungs, like in all the movies, no this was different. I have a fear of not knowing, like majority of human beings they don't like the unknown. In lameness terms they like to be filled in even though we know pretty much nothing. This dream i woke from every night was just what i hated, the unknown.

Its normally the same sometimes I'm lucky enough to not see this horror that kept me up, but normally I'm not that lucky. I normally just see me but instead of looking out of my eyes, I'm looking at myself. I see me looking at this boy, his face is always blurry, but each time it gets more and more clear. I see a look on my face, its something i normally don't see, I'm... happy. As soon as the smile appears on my face though, the boy walks away. I pull and pull on him and i begin to yell. Next i see him take my face in his hands, so tender like he really cares. This was normally the time when in movies he would passionately kiss me, and we would smile and laugh. Not this though, instead he takes my face, i see my mouth moving but no sound is coming out. All i hear is a dark menacing ticking noise that clouds my head, confusing me. He takes my face and pulls it near, i see his lips press gently with such grace against my cheek . His lips move to my ear, and all the ticking just stops " I will be back, i promise," his voice echoes over and over again. I fall to the ground and see tears fall and fall. Thats when i wake up, never knowing if this boy who cares so much, who carefully planned to truly love me ever comes back, not knowing if he lied, no thats all that happens and thats why it haunts me.

I woke up again looked towards my night stand with a glowing green light reading "Three Thirty Four," great another restless night. I thought to my self i tried to wonder back to my dreams but it was helpless. I threw the covers off of me facing the cold air that i was protected from. I was sick of the same routine, falling asleep around twelve and waking up around three. I swung my legs over the bed stretched my arms and let out a yawn. I slide down slowly off my bed and sat on the floor. I curled my legs in front of me and breathed in to let all the dark quietness of my empty room sink in. It was dead silent it nearly killed me, i knew why i couldn't sleep but i didn't want to face the reality, but i was forced to. The truth was that i was crazy, absoulutely, completly, crazy.

What do you think?

Grammar and spelling help needed i know, well explain to me what you think, any help is appreciated ten points to the first person to answer every thing :]]]

My first paragraph is in another question so yeah search for it if you want

"I... Don't love you though" i said not looking up from the ground. It finally spilled out, and it felt so good to get it off my chest. Me and Jeremy have known each other sense the second grade. We knew every thing about each other, i could tell you every last one of his fears from spiders to death. Even though i knew his worst fear in the world was losing me, and he would do anything to stop it. When i finally said it, he gave up i could feel his hand that was clenched around my arm loosen its hold. I knew it killed him what i just said. He was tall, handsome, smart, and blonde. His eyes were dark blue almost just like the ocean. I told him every thing and anything he was my best friend and currently my boyfriend. I could feel his gaze stare me down.

"leave then, go home. I don't care. So what i have treated you like a damn princess and did nothing wrong but love you. This is what i get huh?" He looked down at his shoes searching for the right words, and which ones would burn the most. "Wow, so are you happy? Happy that what we had is, is done now? Is that what your saying? For me to get out of your life, not talk any more, just done?" He was in pain now i could tell he was dying inside. I could read him like a book, he always wore his emotions right there in plain sight, even though he wanted to hide them.

"if you want... that then fine..." I knew that the only way for him to get over me was for him to hate me. For me to hurt him so bad he couldn't even look at me. "Jeremy, I'm done with you, i don't give a damn about what you have done for me. Hell i don't even care about you in general" Hoping he would know that i was lying.

"Your lying" He looked me in the eyes moved the hair from my face. He shook his head. "why?" Damn, i thought he wouldn't notice. "look me in the eyes and say it, say it all." I looked him straight in the face pushed his hand off of me, starred him right in the eyes trying so hard to look brave.

" I do not love you." It got silent, to silent he looked at me i could see tears in his eye, he was to big of a tuff guy to cry. Maybe get on his knees and beg but not cry.

What do you think? Gramer help needed i know tell me every thing that needs fixing

Also does it flow? its only part of my story so it wont quite make sense

More to come!

Have you ever had that feeling? You Know the one, when your stomach hurts, and you feel heavy. Like someone is pushing down on you with such might, that you feel like your going to shatter? When you can feel your legs tremble and you just shake. Than you tell your self over and over again that you wont cry. Than you take a deep breath, and when you let all the air out, thinking your fine. Than you think of why you want to cry, and you feel all the tears just... just fall. You hurt all over and your choking between gasping for air, and the pain full sobs but that's not what hurts the most. The pain of knowing your to weak to even hold back from crying. Knowing your messed up, and knowing that the cause of these tears were your own stupidity. Have you ever had that feeling?

please help answer the following questions

What do you think is going on with this person

Can you relate

And is it descriptive enough

its kinda a poem but not idk just tell me if you like it

tonight i wont smile i wont lauhge i wont talk ill just sit hear in silence. I wont wimper i wont sob ill just let the tears fall sofly on the floor and shatter when they hit, i wont yell your name in anger knowing you did this to me no matter how hard i want to i wont i'll just sit here and cry cause im weak, weak like you made me cause you broke me and now i just have to get away from you and even the thought of you... you broke me, the once strong girl is a tiny fragil thing that wants so hard to get away but cant cause the only person in the world that really will take her and love her is the one who breaks her over, and over, and over again, and there is only so much one person can take, and i have taken enough for two. So stop hurting me more just lossen your grip, cause im to young to be dying and you are killing me slowly. . .

i suck at spelling i know grammer help would be helpful not so much spelling

She walks into a room feeling the burn of every eye in the world burying into her shoulders, she try's to shrug it off with a smile she feels like crying but knows better than to break down in the middle of a room filled of views just waiting to see her fall, to see her break to see her fail. She knows better than to look up to meet her end she feels her eyes burn and holds back trying to forget the world and think of something good and wholesome but there isn't anything left, when did she become so angry so upset so sad, sense when has she dreaded the mornings light, and annoyed by the chirp of cheerful birds bust enjoying life sense when has she hoped so much for a end? sense when did she stop being human?

Every on says they pictuered me as bella in the twilight series... so i was wondering what yall thought this is a picture i took today with my friend so tell me do yall think i remind you of how you pictuered bella?

http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z31/emmysara/10...